Review Detail of GGJ in The way of the villain

"I read until chapter 27, so here's my review: the writing quality is okay if you are a beginner reader. The story development was okay but not really unique, as it resembles more of a cultivation world (where characters kill and become stronger until the end). Our character's thinking is on track and fully developed, so you won't be bothered if the main character is dumb or makes silly mistakes. Anyway, the overall performance of the writing is good. The world background was also explained in detail."