Item: The strongest Demonic Immortal
Rating: 4.2
Author: CetusWritings

CetusWritingsLv32yr

2022-09-16 14:24

The character design and the frequent updates are a definitely good and the way he built the background for the world was good as well, the names are definitely better than what I've seen in most novels.

The strongest Demonic Immortal

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