It is so perfect for me. No offence, but i have found some grammatical and punctuation errors. But no question on the world building and story development. Just wonderful. But I have a problem with the female lead, which is she is a bit flawless and beyond human. I want a more humane Pragya on your next book. The rest is perfect. Keep up the good work.
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