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LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv52yr
2022-10-11 06:27

Great start. The author did his research on the novel and it shows. It's well written, coherent and structured. I've greatly enjoyed the first dozen chapters and hope you write more. One thing I have to ask if there's going to be any mention of any wives he had in his first run? Or what happened to his past self in the new timeline?

Dual Cultivation In Martial Peak

Pastlives
4.7
88 Chs

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Pastlives
PastlivesAuthor

It will. But it’s impossible for him to know right now since he is in the starting world, its impossible to inquire about the 3000 Worlds rn. As for past life, it’ll be mentioned in a flashback.

2yr
LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv5

You have a schedule?

Pastlives:It will. But it’s impossible for him to know right now since he is in the starting world, its impossible to inquire about the 3000 Worlds rn. As for past life, it’ll be mentioned in a flashback.
2yr
Pastlives
PastlivesAuthor

No🗿

LordInsanity:You have a schedule?
2yr
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sideface
sidefaceLv4

if you update this more,i think it will really get popular(Dual cultivation,"Stealing" waifus,stealing items from the protagonist hahahaha),the writing is good,the dialogue flows smoothly,the author actually does his research.

2yr

_GoldenStick_
_GoldenStick_Lv3

I'm speechless with this Fan Fiction! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] A hidden gem ................. ................. ................. Cultured Men must read it🔥

2yr
Spabsta
SpabstaLv14

Ohohohoh another trash fic by past live. Why doesnt he just snu snu himself at this point. Such a bum.

2yr
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Ch 26 as of this, its borderline bad. I just hope it change after he start his dual cultivation. Some scene are ok, but become bad cuz its lengthened that it feels like filler. The way he capture girls is one tier lower than akikan’s. Well its kinda the same, but the ways this is written is kinda... Anyway, i dont see any possible char development hapenning. Cuz mc is already a made man, i mean it will look and feel weird if he is still developing his char after living for millions of years. Also it seems that the romance between his first wife(wont say who cuz of spoiler) is hapenning behind the scene. So why not get it over with so he can already dual cultivate? Why wait more than 25+ chap to make it happen? I mean if your not even gonna show their romance development, it will just feel like what he did to his other girls. Make them fall in an instant, but still not doing anything to for a couple of hours or days so they will fall deeper. lol. The (fake)twins have more romance(if you can even call it ramance) than his first wife. Good point: good gramar

2yr
Ur_lovely_pervert
Ur_lovely_pervertLv4

Well I like ur idea it has a lot of potential hope u will really keep updating 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎👍👍👍😎👍👍👍😎👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

2yr
Origin_Seer
Origin_SeerLv13

Author I truly appreciate your work and this novel is much more interesting than the original novel

1yr
Time_walker
Time_walkerLv14

Its hard to find any onging martial peak fanfic so seeing one that is still onging is a blessing especially since the story the quite interesting. I highly recommend giving it a try you wont be disappointed.

2yr
Melshan
MelshanLv7

Steal all the women from this idiot yang kai, and add all the other women the yang kai trash didn't add. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM

2yr
Egoist_lover
Egoist_loverLv2

I love it !! I hope to have mores chapters

2yr
Lord_Azathoth
Lord_AzathothLv4

Welcome back bro and thanks for not dropping the fanfic yet 🙏 We're expecting more chapters in future I'll donate power stones every day ok 👌

1yr
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