I cannot say much with just one chapter, but the summary made me interested, searching for dragons, the writing quality is okay but the author needs to put efforts in it and [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hank_moses
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LIKEyou could try to use old English words if you could as the language of dragons and the rest is fine just make conversation feel more natural
Hank_moses:The writing style is meant to give it a middle age feel that's the whole idea but I'll try adjusting it