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Mirian_Chigbu
Mirian_ChigbuLv11yr
2023-07-23 05:29

Omg ...... I'm totally in love with this book💙,it's sooo interesting☺,more chapters please😌 i can't wait,i'm sooo excited😁 You're really good,I've read your other books and it was awesome👍 keep it up

The Rain Gave Me Love

Samantha_R_Samuel
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Samantha_R_Samuel
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thank you so much, really appreciate it!

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Elefant_App
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I have got to admit this is the best book i've read this month! well descriptive and wants me want to read more, i also enjoy the pace too, i really want to see how this story ends

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Juanita_Samuel
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This book is so captivating to be honest with you. There's just something about it that draws me in I love it a lot, makes me wanna keep reading to find out more, I hope you keep up the uniqueness dear author!

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DARK_DEKU
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This book is so good that I wanted to give it a five star but the name made me give it four and a half because the name doesn't make it sound interesting but the book is great

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Zully_Bello
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the book deserves a 5 star from me because its the same old thing i see in this romance novels everywhere else the book is promising i hope the end excites me just as much as the beginning did

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RavenCorella
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The synopsis and the cover are 10/10. Cuteness overload.. The introduction and the whole rain premise was nice as well. Zara carries the novel on her back even if she's currently a child, but I can't help but feel somewhat mislead. The synopsis promised a spring of blossoming romance, and instead we get tragedy sprinkled with a bit of trauma ;-; The bullying aspect was fine, and actually enjoyable, but I got kinda turned off when even by chapter 16 she's still acting like a toddler despite being 18. I genuinely thought she was like a pre-schooler when the novel started, but then it turns out she was 16 at the time of the accident? Perhaps I'm simply confused. Or did you assing a much higher age just to legalize romance? On average, if people didn't skim through, it'd require an hour to get to the promised parts. I think you need to pick up the pace a little. I mentioned this in the comments as well, but present tense novels don't work out all that well, and it's not too late to change. Also, rename your chapters. Currently it reads Chapter 5, CHAPTER FOUR. Leave it blank or put a defining keyword in. All in all, after some proofreading to streamline the reading process, it could become a top novel. The premise is appealing, to say nothing of the character herself. All you need now is consistency and an inexhaustible drive to improve. Good luck.

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Tifala
TifalaLv1

A good and sometimes quite heavy novel in places. The behavior of the main character is well described, gradually the main character opens up, she has friends who do not know about what happened. The author tries and improves his novel. Added to the collection

1yr
ForerunnerOfSky
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Very good quality and amazing writing, good romance from what I’ve read. The dialogue is pretty good, and the synopsis draws readers in

1yr
Marianne_2020
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the story is amazing and I absolutely love it, not your regular kind of love story, it's great to read something new and refreshing. it has great potential and I can't wait to read more. all the best author!!

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First_Flame
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5/5 for writing style.A good read, with the way the author narrates the story and how it is progressing is captivating and makes one keep following it, to know whats'sgoijg to happen next.

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