Hi author here with a shameless review.
I want to say several things, so let's go slowly.
About the writing quality, I'm going to be honest here, it's not the best and isn't near since I'm not that good at English, but I'm trying, so bear with it until either I get better or I can pay a grammar checker.
The story development, I'm trying to make it slow, not too much, but slow, so I don't know how that will end.
The character design, it gets better (I think) around the chapter 11, so if you can pass the first ones, it will improve (a little, don't know in the future how it will be).
The updating stability, I'm gonna be straight honest, it's awful. Since I'm a student with a quite strict school, I have lots of exams, so I have to study, and also this is a hobby, so I have other priorities. If you can understand that, I thank you, if you can't, I can't do nothing about it.
And finally, the world background, there isn't too much right now, and probably it won't be too complex in the future, since I'm very clueless.
If after all that negative things I said about my book (I now realize this doesn't help at all) you still want to read it and actually read it, I welcome you to this adventure that I don't know where will take us.
(Pss, also join the discord, so we can chat and hear me ramble.)
