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ratuzinLv52yr
2022-09-13 10:38

very good for now, the system is not OP and is new or at least I didn't find one using the same idea, I just advise not to use dialogs from different people in the same paragraph, even if it's few words between two people still put the lines in different paragraphs because it is easier for readers and most people leave the story without even reading when they see this type of writing.

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