Review Detail of _Rockbison_ in Plot Manipulator

Although there is not many chapters uploaded but what l came to know after reading those few chapters are that its a very cool and interesting plot story..... Also there are a lots of grammatical errors but its okay as long as the story is nice and interesting which this story is..... Keep going author and hope u can take care of ur all mistakes and will make this story more interesting so that no one can complain but fall in love with it...