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PleadingCat
PleadingCatLv32yr
2022-12-17 02:17

Writing Quality (Translation) ★ • Translation is a good or even worst than MTL Story Development ★★ • MC transmigrated to a world called "Blue Planet" where a game called "Heaven" has fallen upon them, there's a ranking system and of course the mc has no parents troupes.. Character Design ★ • The mc is very predictable, with no development, just him and his narcissistic self.. He even wanted his saber to call him "Big Brother" instead of "Master", very cringe.. Updating Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★ • The same as before, no comment here.. World Background ★ • Just remember that the world is called "Blue Planet" with other worlds beside them and countries are named as "Dragon Planet" which we all know what country that is...

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KingOfDog
KingOfDogLv5

fyi in mtl's, the earth is either called blue star or blue planet

Palea
PaleaLv3

no, translation is 2 stars. it only becomes 1 star when they start replacing letters with numbers and characters like (<)=%> etc.

killersoul
killersoulLv13

no at that point it deserves 0 stars but sadly webnovel doesn't allow that

Palea:no, translation is 2 stars. it only becomes 1 star when they start replacing letters with numbers and characters like (<)=%> etc.
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