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Bismeet_Mann_7363
Bismeet_Mann_7363Lv132yr
2022-10-01 17:51

Good story and I am very much enjoying reading it. The character feels like he would do something I would do (just screwing around). Gave it a point for having ranni as fmc. The reason I gave a 4 on story development was because of how fast he was inducted into young justice. Author explained why he did it and I can agree that it doesn’t really matter how he gets in but I think it could’ve been done better. TL:DR- Good, read it.

Elden Lord Travels to DC

GoldDragonMachina
4.4
20 Chs

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Bismeet_Mann_7363
Bismeet_Mann_7363Lv13

+1 point for having the cover page look like it was made in 3 seconds on ms paint.

2yr
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GoldDragonMachina
GoldDragonMachinaAuthor

fair, I did induct MC quite forcefully. My excuse in my mind was the MC had a max luck stat. Thanks for the review.

2yr
GoldDragonMachina
GoldDragonMachinaAuthor

30 seconds, lol.

Bismeet_Mann_7363:+1 point for having the cover page look like it was made in 3 seconds on ms paint.
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