The only fault with this story is that it focuses more on the MC's sister and other friends than MC , after the few starting chapters there has not been a single ch purely dedicated to MC , all we read is about the sister and the original 'main characters '
False_Architect
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LIKEFalse_Architect:Hello Reader, Thank you for taking your time in leaving an honest review, and I hope you can continue to read the story. The point about the MC's sister is the most pointed out issue I've been receiving, but all I can say is that everyone has a proper role in the story, and it's just that... at least in these chapters, is a build-up for the future scenarios. Anyway, thank you for pointing out the thing that most my Readers see, and still... I hope through time as the story goes, I'd be able to change your mind for the better.
Hello Reader, Thank you for taking your time in leaving an honest review, and I hope you can continue to read the story. The point about the MC's sister is the most pointed out issue I've been receiving, but all I can say is that everyone has a proper role in the story, and it's just that... at least in these chapters, is a build-up for the future scenarios. Anyway, thank you for pointing out the thing that most my Readers see, and still... I hope through time as the story goes, I'd be able to change your mind for the better.