The only fault with this story is that it focuses more on the MC's sister and other friends than MC , after the few starting chapters there has not been a single ch purely dedicated to MC , all we read is about the sister and the original 'main characters '
False_Architect
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LIKEHello Reader, Thank you for taking your time in leaving an honest review, and I hope you can continue to read the story. The point about the MC's sister is the most pointed out issue I've been receiving, but all I can say is that everyone has a proper role in the story, and it's just that... at least in these chapters, is a build-up for the future scenarios. Anyway, thank you for pointing out the thing that most my Readers see, and still... I hope through time as the story goes, I'd be able to change your mind for the better.
False_Architect:Hello Reader, Thank you for taking your time in leaving an honest review, and I hope you can continue to read the story. The point about the MC's sister is the most pointed out issue I've been receiving, but all I can say is that everyone has a proper role in the story, and it's just that... at least in these chapters, is a build-up for the future scenarios. Anyway, thank you for pointing out the thing that most my Readers see, and still... I hope through time as the story goes, I'd be able to change your mind for the better.