Greetings to those of you that'll arrive at this place at a later date. As the author, I'll be giving a shameless review of the book. I trust you guys will have a great time reading this book. The writing quality is good and I'd be happy if you guys drop comments if there's an error found. The story kicks off with a slow start but it gets fast as it progresses. Although, I said it gets fast, I have to inform you that there are also times where I'll have to make the scenes detailed, making it take one or more chapters. The characters are good. I try to describe them as much as I can, so you the readers can get an imaginative idea of the character. Not all characters are thoroughly described though. Luke tends to act without brain lots of times and other times, he's as smart as a human can be. I'll be updating daily for a while. Look forward to getting feedbacks from you all. The world setting isn't Earth as we know it. It's a different world entirely and I'll slowly but surely bring you guys on a tour around the world. THANK YOU ALL FOR CHOOSING "REINCARNATION OF AN ALL-ROUNDER" 🙇🏾♂️🙂
UrekSenpa1
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LIKEI think you should let loose more, and really work on the dialogues. The dialogues are average at best and the world building needs work too. You haven't also explained the power systems. And the relationship between omed and like is just Jim eating omeds food and washing the plates. You should work on that more.
i think I explained their relationship but nevertheless, I'll work more on those things you've pointed out. Thanks alot.
Aikay_Emm:I think you should let loose more, and really work on the dialogues. The dialogues are average at best and the world building needs work too. You haven't also explained the power systems. And the relationship between omed and like is just Jim eating omeds food and washing the plates. You should work on that more.
Broken_Hades:Yogurt-san, the story is looking interesting tho I haven't started buh we would get there. Keep doing ur best bro
I'm not so sure there'll be a harem. But I'll be holding a poll soon. You guys get to choose from a list of options about something. More information will become spoilers 😅.
Tommyshelby:Is there a harem
UrekSenpa1:I'm not so sure there'll be a harem. But I'll be holding a poll soon. You guys get to choose from a list of options about something. More information will become spoilers 😅.
UrekSenpa1:I'm not so sure there'll be a harem. But I'll be holding a poll soon. You guys get to choose from a list of options about something. More information will become spoilers 😅.
Sorry about my late answer. Luke will team up with others to face the situations that they'll surely encounter in the future.
Ghost_Playing:Author, what does this mean exactly:image