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Daniel_olatunji
Daniel_olatunjiLv12yr
2022-09-22 16:54

Tbvh at first the pacing didn’t get me, but as I kept reading I got hooked, really good write up, looking forward to reading more of these.💯

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Well thank you for your review. I also look forward to more comments from you.

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Xeno_Xavier
Xeno_XavierLv4

Alright, let me start this review by stating that I've only read till chapter 15 so the author might have improved after. Now for the review itself, I'll start with what I do think the author did well. The best thing about this book is the updating stability with the book getting at least a chapter a day your list won't go a while before reading, now unfortunately that's where the good part kind of stops. Now for the part I thought was the worst has to be the world-building and further the world itself, my reasoning for this is that whenever I'm reading I find myself highly confused as to why some things like plastic exist and then later I'm told they have gold coins as currency. The biggest cause of this problem in my opinion how the author glazes over things that are important to world-building and leads to a high lack of detail. For the rest of the book, I find it to be mostly average with the writing quality being fine but with mistakes still very visible every chapter or so. Lastly, I would like to comment on the character design of this book which is very lacking so far landing as the second worst, in my opinion, the cause of this is how inconsistent the characters have acted compared to their introduction, an example is how Luke started the book by going to test if he had awakened at any opportunity but when given prove he might have he doesn't go test it. I will conclude this review by giving my opinion on this book. I find the book so far to be not worth my time reading, I wouldn't go as far as to say the book is bad but it is highly mid so far. If you have a problem with my opinion touch grass and read better books. See ya

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