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SenorPhatbackAuthor1yrSenorPhatback

This is my first time writing anything other than short stories in school. Please give this a read and tell me what you think about it. All constructive criticism is welcome. Over time my writing will improve. This is going to be a decently long story about Havok and his companions striving to achieve their dreams.

Havok, Lunatic of the Darkness

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preet_0Lv14preet_0

Is there a romance and if there is will it be harem.???

1yr

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Kw0zLv14Kw0z

Like the other guy asked, is there romance or harem? And if not, are there lemons?

1yr

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SenorPhatbackAuthorSenorPhatback

Apologies for the delay, I just saw this and yes there will be romance, but there will not be a harem.

preet_0:Is there a romance and if there is will it be harem.???

1yr

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SenorPhatbackAuthorSenorPhatback

Sorry for the late reply. Yes, on the romance. No, on the harem.

Kw0z:Like the other guy asked, is there romance or harem? And if not, are there lemons?

1yr

dylan_pyle_1738Lv12dylan_pyle_1738

what kind of romance will it be simpish or will he excite the girl

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The_Bob_1098Lv2The_Bob_1098

I am only a couple chapters in but I am enjoying it so far, however the cover is really bad imp.

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dylan_pyleLv14dylan_pyle

shame ruined i guess

SenorPhatback:Apologies for the delay, I just saw this and yes there will be romance, but there will not be a harem.

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