Review Detail of Eslyna in Summoner: Monster Girl Harem!

I remember Webnovel used to let author's delete reviews... as I am surprised this novel is rated so high so am a bit sus after reading a few chapters. the word count is a lot, but the writing quality is not great. Especially the conversations, and there are multiple instances of confusions or glaring plot holes. I am also always confused on whether a character is talking, if it's Judy their inner monologue, or the mc can read it all. Everything is extremely convenient for the MC, and no real sense of plot currently other than making MC as fabulous and perverted / virgin as possible and build up his very overly convenient harem. Even the one antagonist already became shallow...