I really like the story, there are some grammatical errors here and there but over all is well writen. I like the direction the story is taking and can't wait to read more about it. In my personal opinion I would like to see more interactions between the MC and FL, after all there is HAREM as a tag, but thinking about the MC personality is undestandable why there is not much progress in this aspect. P.D: Author please don't let my personal affect how you write your story and just continue writing what you want, after all this is YOUR story and is great.
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