Story is quite plain, I am not telling that its bad like some overly rushed or unplaned ffs. It just don't make you invested in story. It seems to me that author is not good at writting action scenes and interacting scenes(whole school time dialogs look like some awkward moments when you don't know what to speak of..). Some plot arcs are directly skiped. MC here knows plot and changes some matters but sometimes just ignors complitly(like Momo going to the Uwami hero's intership).
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Thanks for the review. You're right, I don't know how to write an interesting fight scene, and for the interaction between characters, I just write whatever comes to my mind at the time. I will try to improve those as I write, MC doesn't care about cannon events he'll just plough through it. And he only know until season four so he doesn't know anything after that. Anyway, I hope you liked the story. Thank you for the review.
