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2022-12-15 21:39

Story is good as far I read. But there are few things. Like there are some grammar mistakes and some confusing sentences. Although I know story is a journal so it would be from Mikhail's Pov. But reading it sometimes is boring. Story is good. You don't know where story will go.

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