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Kw0z
Kw0zLv142yr
2022-10-03 07:40

Well, I said it was a good concept, but that I didn’t like the characters in my first review, and now I’m even more adamant on that. Now, the MC is just the dog of the woman who should be the real protagonist of this novel since she’s just better overall. It’s really pathetic how the main character is weaker than almost everyone. I mean… he’s even weaker than a butler for gods sake.

Mirroring Jester: Sanguinary

OnizukaShinu
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OnizukaShinu
OnizukaShinuAuthor

Bro… Welp opinions are subjective I suppose. Anyways thanks for the review, I suppose.

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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Tip: stop making side characters so much better than the main character.

OnizukaShinu:Bro… Welp opinions are subjective I suppose. Anyways thanks for the review, I suppose.
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OnizukaShinu
OnizukaShinuAuthor

Hehe The main character will be much better than the rest and making him grow will be the main attraction for the viewers. At least that’s what I intended to do.

Kw0z:Tip: stop making side characters so much better than the main character.
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Kw0z
Kw0zLv14

Yeah, idk. Just kind of irks me that they’re more interesting, have better backstories, are stronger, and usually smarter than the MC. Weak to strong novels just aren’t for me, but good luck. 👍

OnizukaShinu:Hehe The main character will be much better than the rest and making him grow will be the main attraction for the viewers. At least that’s what I intended to do.
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OnizukaShinu
OnizukaShinuAuthor

Thanks I’ll be needing it. I’ll remember you once I get to the top.

Kw0z:Yeah, idk. Just kind of irks me that they’re more interesting, have better backstories, are stronger, and usually smarter than the MC. Weak to strong novels just aren’t for me, but good luck. 👍
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Obligatory Author’s review. This book is a rewrite for my COPYCAT series. Please comment your critiques and help me improve my writing. Thank you! And ENJOY!

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Hannah_King_6215
Hannah_King_6215Lv14

What I find the most interesting is the fact it's written first person which I find one of the hardest ways to write a story. I really love the concept and I hope the author keeps going with his perspective. This is a unique gem I think and feel this could go far. I def recommend it.

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babydragon25
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The author has nice concept and a genius perspective in writing a story. Sure, there are some tiny errors but a little more hard work will help the story go far. Good luck author

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