Review Detail of Lord_Of_Dawn in RWBY: GAMER PATH

The story is good, but there are three points that I think destroyed the work a little (Spoiler), firstly, the protagonist always gets stronger versions of his abilities through fusions, leaving the old ones obsolete, it would be better if the old abilities improved to stronger forms through level increases, the second point is that the protagonist's harem is very poorly developed, he has almost no romantic involvement with them, giving the impression that it was somewhat forced, apart from the girl's leaving and returning, which was very unnecessary and it happened off screen most of the time, third point is the final fight which was very disappointing he went there and only hit killed both of them,very disappointing