Review Detail of Spamifico in RWBY: GAMER PATH

I’ll be honest, the story is well paced for a gamer-style fanfic, if you come over expecting the MC to be super OP in a couple of chapters this ain’t for you, and that is something I can appreciate. Alongside with the story being relatively well written as there are some mistakes here and there, but they don’t detract from the story itself. Now for the issues: The mc is an idiot through and through which in a normal situation would add some issues to the story in this case is to “show that he is human and bound to make mistakes” and don’t get me wrong that great but it’s a lazy way to show it even when the mc mentions it. And the other issue is the artificial conflict set on the later half of the initiation arc/JNPR arc. If the system can’t detect the intrusion of the Nightmare Grimm on the user, then what good is the system for? Or in any case why would you show us the intrusion and then call attention to it in very blantant manner when it would’ve been better not to mention it at all, use the character introduction of Shion AND then show the Grimm without compromising the system and the narrative.