Item: DC: Colossus
Rating: 5
Author: KingBing96

KingBing96Lv142yr

2022-09-09 08:34

Author come back with more chapters soon please. Cause I really enjoy your story. I like the way the powers mutated to become something else when put together. I honestly thought that the meta gene would have mutated more with quick silvers meta gene as well. I don’t think his height would’ve been affected but he probably would’ve slimmed down a bit. Honestly lots of variables could be taken into consideration like he could have a more feral side because of wolverine but it would be a coin toss whether or not it’d be amplified or not by quicksilver. Sorry for the word vomit just really like the story.

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