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AlaskaFish
AlaskaFishLv152yr
2023-03-03 20:41

Honestly, it's good, well written, somehow original with origin story and planned developments, but it is the MC that doesn't cut it for me, as well as the long expositions. I, personally, don't really like manipulative MC, so yeah, I am out, good luck author

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