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you know this is like really deep. It makes you wonder and appreciate what you have that others don't. I like the way you author went deep down into it. I do have something I'd like to say😅 like how the paragraphs are too long and the way you use your punctuation marks. you should like cut the paragraphs just right so you wouldn't like bore the readers and they be like it's too long, when is it gonna end. You know. But this is just for the chp 1-2, 3-4 was amazing too

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Thanku! So Much