Review Detail of aleksandra_pano10 in Moved To A New Link ()

Well honestly I can't say much about the story since there are only two chapters but for know I can saw this could turn into a interesting thrriller if you correct some things. First I would suggest you to do a synopsis since it helps a lot to understand better the story. Then I would say conversation between characters must be shorter since long conversation usually can be boring. Writing style is unique because usually I see that authors prefer more (") and I like this thing. For updating I would suggest one chapter once per week Good luck with your novel