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soja_soja
soja_sojaLv32yr
2022-09-04 23:51

you know this is like really deep. It makes you wonder and appreciate what you have that others don't. I like the way you author went deep down into it. I do have something I'd like to say馃槄 like how the paragraphs are too long and the way you use your punctuation marks. you should like cut the paragraphs just right so you wouldn't like bore the readers and they be like it's too long, when is it gonna end. You know. But this is just for the chp 1-2, 3-4 was amazing too

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Ink_Quanta
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Thanku! So Much

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obiparadise_purity
obiparadise_purityLv12

The character description it's good, I love the start of this book and the introduction of Mr. Bee. The writing quality is great and hopes the writer keeps it up.

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Moonwriting
MoonwritingLv4

hi dear author....love Mr Bee and Officer Grey....just reading the first chapter and know it's going to be a good read.....the world background and the way you describe every minor detail is quite phenomenal... keep it up dear..

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DymenS
DymenSLv3

I'll be honest the book is quite good. I am not really into detective things but this was a good read. The introduction of Mr. bee was creative. Most importantly, I like your writing style. At least from where I am, I like the novel.

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aleksandra_pano10
aleksandra_pano10Lv1

Well honestly I can't say much about the story since there are only two chapters but for know I can saw this could turn into a interesting thrriller if you correct some things. First I would suggest you to do a synopsis since it helps a lot to understand better the story. Then I would say conversation between characters must be shorter since long conversation usually can be boring. Writing style is unique because usually I see that authors prefer more (") and I like this thing. For updating I would suggest one chapter once per week Good luck with your novel

2yr
Excelsior_x
Excelsior_xLv3

Mr Bee is something else. I have to say, I haven't bought up with the story yet but the chapters I read hooked me. It is hilarious and I would recommend this book to anyone who loves detective stories. The only minor issue I had was the first few chapters where the paragraphs were too long but it was fixed later on. Love the story and will keep reading it and make a later review.

2yr
Allen_Wull
Allen_WullLv1

This is an excellent book and beautifully written, definitely the best book I've read (although admittedly that isn't a large selection.) But also just plain one of the best books I've read.

2yr
Washee_Washee
Washee_WasheeLv2

It's an interesting read with a more philosophical and introspective theme to it. Reading the interactions of Mr.Bee and the Officer Gray and experiencing 1st hand their ideals and perspectives on society was something I did enjoy. Criticism wise, I would have to say that some of the dialogue is too clunky and dense, making it hard to follow at times. Other than main issue, there really isn't much else to say. Conclusion: it's a good read if you are tired of xianxia, cultivation,system, and other genres or want to experience something new.

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sm_yesa
sm_yesaLv3

The character and the story, I like it and seems to be improving, I only read a few chapters but I would want to read more , over all it was impressive though I'm not fond of third POV

2yr
Natay93
Natay93Lv10

This is a well written novel and I like how you have it formatted. You went into great detail and the background was outlined perfectly. I loved how the characters who lived a hard life all came together as one family and started helping others. This is a great book. Keep up the good work.

2yr
Account_nolonger
Account_nolongerLv1

The story is about reality, the characters are amazing and the plot is intriguing since it showcases society, good work, keep it up 馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃憤馃挄馃挄馃挄

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