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RockyMasters
RockyMastersLv142yr
2022-11-26 19:11

well it's not the best fic I ever read but a good one. the epilogue need to be cleaned and you should add what rundown what happened to the maids and all the stuff he's done at the epilogue so that we can see the world have some color that have been painted by the MC here but hey it just my opinion you can totally ignored it and and move on or learn from it with a grain of salt overall it's good fic 8/10

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Dragon15681
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I didn’t even realize that you were making this I just thought another author finally got good at writing and having a descent story only to look at who the author is and just think “ok this person is never gonna write something I hate or can’t follow so let’s enjoy any book he makes in the future even if it’s based on a world I don’t know anything about”

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Очень хороший ФФ из многих которые я читал.....,............................................................... ................................................. .................................................

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