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WaifuWithABomb
WaifuWithABombLv122yr
2023-03-14 23:16

this novel is mid asf. cliche story, the side characters doesn't have a brain. and the conversations between characters are very cringy and unhumanlike, and unnatural, i don't get how you don't see that something is strange with the conversations, i mean you're a human, right? or maybe you never talked to someone in your life? it's just straight up stupid, it's like the conversations were written by 9 yo. the conversations are so bad, it felt strange, lifeless and bland. well, i just read all the free chaps, maybe it'll get better.

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Krypton71
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This novel is a very-well written bunch of cliché villain-esque plots put together… And I can’t say I hate it. Writing Quality: It really helps that story is written with good grammar and that style of writing that is usually present in villain novels giving this that extra flavour. 4.6 stars. Update Stability: The Author updates once/twice a day and the chapters have a good amount of content. 4.7 stars. Story Development: I really like the way author has integrated several different villains in MC’s scope of view, and how some of the cliché endings are broken in this novel. But ultimately this is very cliche (I’m going to keep mentioning this because it’s important to understand that this story is cliche before starting it). In this story, the MC ACTUALLY works towards getting the protags killed which is a plus! (SPOILER: 2 killed within first 100 chaps). 4.4 stars. Character Design: Everything you can expect from the villain MC of this genre: Ruthless, Shameless, Possessive, Vidictive and vain. Something that meshes quite well together to create a character you’ll enjoy reading about. 4.5 stars. World Building: I don’t know what to say, characters appear to pop up out of nowhere for the portag but that’s just the will of the world or whatnot. I think Author or the MC has forgotten about a girl or two from his adventures and so it’s important not to get attached to some of them because MC only wants the best of the best apprently. 4.2 stars. If you want to read a more refined version of villain destroying protagonist’s novel then pick this up. If you tired of this genre then this definitely will not bring anything new to the table and I suggest reading this when you’ve your taste is unsaturated again. (Don’t mind the gif I’m just attracting the h * rny bunch to the review)

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