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Slushy_Apollo
Slushy_ApolloLv151yr
2023-03-30 09:59

The first 40 chapters were good but after that the rest of the novel quickly goes downhill to the level of a mtl novel and it is disappointing

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CH405Kaiser
CH405KaiserLv6

Synopsis is wrong. He doesn’t have a F rank skill, but a B rank skill and it isn’t upgraded to SSR Rank. world background is similar to real life other than being awakened. Mc character design is garbage, at chapter 4 you might just cheer for the female lead. Ignore tag of high iq, more like entitled mc who already has a pretty decent talent but asks the system for a higher upgrade. The system is rather unnecessary in this novel as it should have been supplemented that everyone can see their own status in a game like screen. In fact, the mc asks system why he won’t get a higher upgrade, and while translation is terrible, the reason for that is because his body can’t handle it. The reason I say the mc doesn’t have a high IQ because upon exiting a mystic realm (dungeon training instance), he is asked by a man if the mc had gotten a skill drop. The mc replies he had and used it already. This is a huge red flag because now it just sets up the more enemies come because you had something rare trope, which will later invoke my boss’s boss or my brother’s master cliche to fill up the story Also the female lead tries to cheer up the mc saying that, “it is not the rank of the talent, but how you use and the effort you put in it”. MC ignores the female lead’s words thinking she’s insulting him. Translation definitely needs to be better as it takes away from the reading experience especially with an entitled mc who thinks that because he has a system and clones, he shouldn’t be working as hard.

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