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Traveller here to give some reviews👋 So far the story is in a good pace. No idea what happened in first chap like some program sht and suddenly start of second chap without introducing the background of mc like a typical story. Some errors about the use of he/she and some words but it's not confusing (for me😌) hope that author can fix (I'm not in a hurry lol😌) Let me introduce mc from what i read. 1. Mc is baddass, calm, indifferent but not cold person. 2. A lady killer (what do you expect yk what we brothers want😌) that's it for now i guess The story flow of the story is to feel good or self satisfaction but mc is fortunately rational. So far there's only one faceslap that happened (hopefully there's not many because it gets boring) strongly recommended for casual readers and feelgood stories supporters. I also thank author for coming with this unique type of ability. Patiently waiting for the upcoming chapters😌 Byebye hope this is helpful review Keep up with the good work author Sorry for my broken english not my main language hehez. Adios😌👋

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Thanks a lot for your comment!! Since I'm trying to write for the first time and I'm accumulating experience to get enough growth in writing, your advice is exactly what I need right now. In addition, regarding the question of English grammar, because my native language is not English, it sometimes causes some small mistakes, so I will further check the grammar carefully to avoid this problem in the follow-up, and express your concern for my work and Comment, hope my work will get more comments and attention.