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Dummybeing
DummybeingLv131yr
2023-10-13 13:57

While the first three chapters are short, it was good enough for me to write a review for this good novel!!. With a compelling start and the first meeting between the two of them, it was well written and now i am hoping for more to read! Highly engaging and promising, this novel sets a promising tone.

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KyrieUzumaki
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I’m so happy that you liked the story! I know three chapters are pretty short but I have more coming soon! :)🩷🩷

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Patrik_Crown
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As a fan of vampires, I immediately began reading your book after finding the link on your profile. Although it has only eight chapters out, I wanted to share my thoughts with you. When it comes to the writing quality, I gave you 4 stars due to seeing various mistakes and a few poorly constructed sentences that sometimes made no sense. I would recommend breaking up some of them to improve the clarity of your story so your readers can better imagine what you want them to imagine. As for the stability of updates, I am unsure as I only discovered the novel half an hour ago and read all the chapters in one sitting. However, assuming you release them daily, I gave you a 5-star for that. The story development is well done and quite engaging, drawing you in from the first chapter. The character design is also impressive, with Nicolle being portrayed as a kind-hearted but self-deprecating girl, while Jasper is a sinister yet complex character with his vampiric nature. Regarding the world background, I can't say much as only a few locations have been presented so far. Nonetheless, if the Author continues, I believe there will be many more places to imagine. In conclusion, I would give your book a rating of 4.8 out of 5.0 stars. It's a great story, with well-developed characters and an interesting plot. It had me hooked from the start, and all the time reading it, I was unable to put it down like a Vampire is unable to pull away from the neck of a gorgeous and tasty woman. I highly recommend others give it a chance and I look forward to reading more. Keep up the good work, Author! And for those who are stuck to the end, what are you waiting for? Join Nicolle on her way to conquer the heart of the sinister yet romantic Vampire, Jasper Snow. Peace~

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