Review Detail of Harem_Queen in Mafia Boss's Little Trouble Maker

I read all five chapters! Now there is some good and bad! Like, the storytelling drew me in and I'm curious on how the MC life is now gonna play out now that she is captured by the big bad wolf. My advise however, would be to work on your grammar and input more detail in your story. It would really bring it to life and have the readers more invest! Other than that please keep up the good work~!XD