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Elyorbek_Jumaboyev
Elyorbek_JumaboyevLv12yr
2022-12-06 22:17

Everything is good so far. I like the characters and writing style. Grammar is also good right now. Good luck on working hard. I think real start starts from the chapter 'Death'.

Master Of The Universe

Peace_in_Chaos
4.7
221 Chs

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Elyorbek_Jumaboyev
Elyorbek_JumaboyevLv1

Real story

2yr
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Peace_in_Chaos
Peace_in_ChaosAuthor

Thank you for your 5-star review reader!

2yr
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RainbowBeheader
RainbowBeheaderLv13

harem?

Peace_in_Chaos:Thank you for your 5-star review reader!
1yr
Peace_in_Chaos
Peace_in_ChaosAuthor

There won't be a harem...

RainbowBeheader:harem?
1yr
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RainbowBeheader
RainbowBeheaderLv13

nice

Peace_in_Chaos:There won't be a harem...
1yr
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Zasha1
Zasha1Lv12

Will give this a try then.

Peace_in_Chaos:There won't be a harem...
1yr
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The_reader_ofnovel
The_reader_ofnovelLv14

Is there any romance

Peace_in_Chaos:There won't be a harem...
1yr
1
Peace_in_Chaos
Peace_in_ChaosAuthor

Yes

The_reader_ofnovel:Is there any romance
1yr
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Cosmic
CosmicLv15

fake review

1yr
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Peace_in_Chaos
Peace_in_ChaosAuthor

As the author of the novel, I will give my story the highest score shamelessly. This story is about the master who is calm, handsome, (innocent), benevolent yet cold, and revengeful at the same time. His disciples are also one of a kind. Spoiler: The story will be slow-paced in the beginning with multiple POVs from the chapter Huan to the end of "Fighting League". And from that point, it will be a little faster. Read the story while you become a disciple of Rong Yuan along the way...

1yr

IlovePeace
IlovePeaceLv13

Amazing book!. At first it will be slow paced but the plot and the characters are wonderful! I recommend this to fellow readers!

1yr
Cosmic
CosmicLv15

this was not executed well. The story has way too many pov's. it's horrendous it starts to put me to sleep and can't focus. I made it to ch 16 and couldn't stand the grammer anymore.

1yr
fantasyylover
fantasyyloverLv1

I am starting to get interested the more I read. Keep it up author! I liked the all three books! Recommend them to everyone!

1yr
ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14

Interesting story. There are a few grammar and spelling errors at the start, but its still pretty easy to read so that's not really a problem. The original betrayal is quite... dramatic. Like the guy was clearly using some voodoo curses to get to that situation lol. The story seems fun enough and the new disciple character seems pretty fun. It's a decent read. Do check it out.

2yr
JOHN_UZB
JOHN_UZBLv1

Very good novel. I am new to web novels but this is actually fun. I have a good time reading the book. Thanks author! Your writing style also good. Characters are well developed.

2yr
IlovePeace
IlovePeaceLv13

Everything is in order. Updating stability is also good. In short, Amazing!

2yr
Sakura_Charmash
Sakura_CharmashLv2

One of the most intriguing books I came across here. You just can't put it down once you start reading. Greatcharacter building, smooth descriptions and the plot has a nice feel to it. Everything fits like a clockwork and the narrative is sleek. Going to its well earned place in my library, I will definitely be returning to read more. Please keep writing!

2yr
EveZenier
EveZenierLv2

Fascinating, Engaging, Immersing😍😍😍 Really loved it. The description, actions, emotions and thoughts of the characters, all of it was captivating. Good job author! Keep it up. Waiting for more chapters🤗🤗🤗

2yr
Daoistg23iOI
Daoistg23iOILv1

Everything is good. Characters, system, background and even the system. Overall, amazing!👏👏👏 First seven chapters are about how Yuan dies and then the real story begins. Slow pace story!

1yr
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