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Blueman97
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This is the lowest I could reasonably give while being biased against it. They story is great for a slice of life, you could honestly remove the copyrighted names and the whole supernatural stuff and fighting scenes and you would get a standard slice of life novel. The bad parts which could probably be just me, I hate Rangiku characteristic and and any cool thing that appears in chapters that appears as a tease, never arrives and I am left skimming the boring stuff. Because honestly i am more interested in what sort of stories could come from involving yoruichi, shelly, and even that oc ruben because he looks more interesting that any other character, like that ramen girl, and that girl clerk. The silverman gym is good to goof off the kda stuff could be a more interesting, and the romantic stuff is problably more interesting to see it develop and mature with them than rangiku and cana, and I am by chapter 69 and it is not even on the school part yet which was insinuated I think 20+ chapters ago. The worst part is that this author is putting actions scenes with a slice of life tag, which gets me exited and then when I reached the part which insinuates more actions is just a time skip and that really putts me off, because the author just enticed me with action and good characters that seem interesting to me and is stuck with the characters that I personally dislike which really did not help with my earlier expectations. If this was just slice of life and no action I could probably understand and bear reading about the characters I dislike. So I started skimming to see if there was anything of interest because of it and I could not bear read it anymore because of it. And don't tell me I should not read slice of life if i do not like it. There are some slice of life that are better than some actions that I really enjoyed and honestly my own expectations did not do me any favors

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Transported to a parallel fictional world

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TotherWindow1
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Thanks for the review, I'll take all your criticisms into account for future this fic abd future projects. Thanks for taking the time to review my work.

Chaos_Order8
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Author did u drop your FF?

TotherWindow1:Thanks for the review, I'll take all your criticisms into account for future this fic abd future projects. Thanks for taking the time to review my work.