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Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv142yr
2022-12-28 19:12

its a solid 4 star for me, my only problem for this novel and the reason why i dropped it is cus i don't feel connection or immersion when reading this fanfic. It feels off and sometimes random that i just got tired of reading it.

Transported to a parallel fictional world[Hiatus]

TotherWindow1
4.1
136 Chs

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TotherWindow1
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Thanks for the review, if you got any suggestions on what I could possibly improve upon I would love to hear them. And as for the first chapters being random, they are at first as the chapters leading up to volume two was just to introduce some main characters and the ones Ekko was going to interact most with. Though volume two will focus on the girls at the Inn, and Ekko receiving some long mission.( Volume two starts after chapter 78) But also this is mostly a slice of life Fanfic, so random chapters are basically like your everyday life, sometimes you stay at home and do nothing or other times you go to the gym to meet friends. But thanks for giving it a go anyway.

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Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

Oh no wonder, ill get back into it then after the current novel im reading. I love the story dont worry its just that sometimes things out of context or are not really explained why it happend its like it just happens (hope that made sense lol”

TotherWindow1:Thanks for the review, if you got any suggestions on what I could possibly improve upon I would love to hear them. And as for the first chapters being random, they are at first as the chapters leading up to volume two was just to introduce some main characters and the ones Ekko was going to interact most with. Though volume two will focus on the girls at the Inn, and Ekko receiving some long mission.( Volume two starts after chapter 78) But also this is mostly a slice of life Fanfic, so random chapters are basically like your everyday life, sometimes you stay at home and do nothing or other times you go to the gym to meet friends. But thanks for giving it a go anyway.
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