Review Detail of _Shades_ in Illegal Romance

I just started reading this and I decided to use a little time to drop a review. Okay, down to business. Paragraphing: It seems to engross a reader the more they take in the story. The only problem is that they are longer. Most readers hate long paragraphs, so I suggest you break them. The paragraphs get a 3 out of 10. Dialogue tag: Yeah. This is majorly one problem the author is facing. The repetition of the words ‘said’ will only make the story sound too ordinary and not intriguing. It is advised that the author uses more of showing than telling. E.g He could feel his blood boiling as soon as his eyes skimmed the headlines. Cussing out underneath his breath, he clenched his phone tight and threw it on the couch. "What's the meaning of this?" So far... your book is good. I haven't gone deep yet but from the big grin on my face, it shows that I'm really into this story.