No offense bruh, but they way you're going about this is unique in a bad way. The Saiyan aspect is creative but the hero egg situation? That's impossible. I mean, have you read the novel? Even self-naming is impossible. Monsters and Demons below a certain strength level can't name themselves, it's impossible. In the novel the only one to ever do that was Guy Crimson, he named himself Guy after accumulating a lot of magicles and then ascending to a demon lord, the second ever was that guy at the end of the light novel, I have forgotten his name. Even OG Rimuru couldn't do that at his birth despite his Soul strength and his being the reincarnation of Veldanava. C'mon bro. At least do a little research before you write. I am an author too. I write Naruto fanfic and I had to do a whole lot of research before putting anything down.
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he doesn't have a hero egg, and the name he gave himself was merely a title, it was Guy who named him finally, did you even read bro?
Hmm? The name aside, he got a light spirit. How? Why? He's basically a monster. Monsters don't attract spirits not to talk of a spirit of light. Light Spirit is tantamount to a Potential Hero. How? I lost interest after the totally illogicality nehimd this so I assumed he gave himself a name. I later read after that Guy gave him a name. I apologise for that, but the Monster x Hero x Light Spirit? That a minus for me.
wait but LImunous is also a monster and she has Holly magic if I remember correctly to get that knowledge and ability on how to use it you have to contract a spirit of light...?! it may not be exact though as my memory can sometime reveal itself faulty and lacking.
No. Shuna explained it herself in the anime, Monsters ( humanoids ) CAN use holy magic and you don't need a light spirit to use it.
