It's a good novel. I don't currently have the energy to write a proper review so I will just say my thoughts. Writing quality: I'm not a native English speaker so I can't give a 100% accurate review but I think it's good. Story development: It's still very early in the story so there isn't much to say but it's currently pretty good. Character design: The Mc with how he views everything is very irritating in the beginning. I know that he only views it as a game but his lack of interest in the "lore" and complaining about how realistic the game is. It's just very irritating to read. The other characters are good but they lack enough chapters to get fully developed. Still, they are all mostly enjoyable. Updating stability: It's currently good. World background: The world-building is good but the system appears to little. He doesn't have any status screen. While he can get missions there isn't any specific way how. There also barely exists a way for the Mc to consistently grow stronger. Another small problem that will be solved in the future is the game itself. From my understanding, it's a real world and multiple copies of the game were sold so shouldn't he find other players? That is of course unless his exclusive copy was the only one that let someone enter the real world. Still too little is explained about the game itself and those that sold it. Not that it's a real problem since it will be explained in the future.
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So the game was VR? Like SAO? So confusing, I thought he died and reincarnated.
You should try to read the first chapters again. It was explained in the beginning chapters. And just if you haven't read it, then no. The game transports him into a real world and not VR.
Ornoth:So the game was VR? Like SAO? So confusing, I thought he died and reincarnated.
Soooo. This is polyamory and not harem? Like the girls are in a relationship with eachother equal to their relationship with the MC?
Harem
Ayce_o_Spade:Soooo. This is polyamory and not harem? Like the girls are in a relationship with eachother equal to their relationship with the MC?
Why is polyamory in the description then?
Lazy_Chicken_God:Harem
The author just sees them as the same thing
Ayce_o_Spade:Why is polyamory in the description then?
Ohh. Got ya.
Lazy_Chicken_God:The author just sees them as the same thing
