Bravo, Bravo, you have a talent author which is making me feel depressed right at the moment. In my perception, the book is gothic and it reminds me of a book I read (Not on any device, it's a hard book) called Withering Heights— Written by Emily Brontë. Very interesting and when reading it, almost every paragraph is a suspending point which if the chapter is to end there, I'll like to read the next chapter. Apart from how good the book's theme is, I'll like to advise you to improve the usage of pronouns in terms of referring to a character which has already been mentioned in a certain paragraph. Such will make us the readers not to get bored of reading the same name repeated over and over again. please update more chapters... can't wait more
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