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Review Detail of Freyr4Frost in Wanted Sunset Moons

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Writing is really good, it's not heavy or anything, the world and the plot seem interesting with just the right amount of mysteries, and Marlon saying that nothing is free in this world was pretty impactful. Overall very good beginning though i'd have to say the switch between 1st and 3rd person are kinda confusing to me

Wanted Sunset Moons

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I'm working on that aspect ;).