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Mastersun
MastersunLv12yr
2022-09-18 22:17

The plot is quite interesting well, for many the main problem in this story is the main character himself, who is in fact a minor character, I would recommend the author to edit the plot a little to make the main character who he is now just a minor character to remove his sheep and the intervention of the gods and just make him a talented naval general, and make Rob Stark the main character, and just change the plot description to something like, what if Rob Stark had a twin brother? What if Rob Stark was more politically fit? Then this work would have had less criticism, and readers would not have been deluded by the plot because of the description

The Weirwood Wolf ( Game of Thrones )

Telling_Tall_Tales
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30 Chs

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Telling_Tall_Tales
Telling_Tall_TalesAuthor

I fully agree when I started the fic I intended to have the MC be Thorin but it seems as it evolved I ended up making Robb the MC, I’m not going to go back and edit the whole fic, I have better things to do with my life even if it would make the fic better but I have changed the synopsis so any new readers won’t have the same confusion as the old ones

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Telling_Tall_Tales
Telling_Tall_TalesAuthor

By far the best story I’ve ever read Keep up the good work me

2yr

ExiledLord
ExiledLordLv15

I honestly don't know why the "MC" exists...Robb and Jon get every single benefit and are already established characters. Just unimaginative...

2yr
Mastersun
MastersunLv1

The story is not very good, well, I won't say that it's bad, the main character of this story is a gray mouse, if you remove him from this story, there won't be any changes, it seems that the author is a fan of Rob Stark, and that in this story the main character here is Rob Stark, and not the main character of this story, and One and the like are superfluous here, and in my opinion they should not have been introduced into this story.

2yr
dev62490
dev62490Lv7

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2yr
DaoistZlQoLq
DaoistZlQoLqLv3

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The_man_The_myth
The_man_The_mythLv4

Decent but one of those stories where the mc just doesn’t matter to the story

1yr
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