Review Detail of DummyOfPast in Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

Really appreciate the review. For starters, I kept the chapter brief because I didn't want to add unnecessary words to the word count, lol, and besides, don't worry, the story picks up later. All of these issues have, at least, been addressed in the most recent chapters.

It feels like this might have slipped a bit recently. I’m finding a lot of paragraphs repeating the same information in a different way over and over and it makes it kind of exhausting to read. I love the story and the world but the pace has dragged a ton since the rat pit. It takes two to three chapters to get through one simple thing.

I don't agree with the 'i didn't want to add unnecessary information' part since 90% of each chapter is unnecessary information. And i want to address the obvious plotholes, i.e., not taking the rewards from quests for hundreds of chapters or not checking notifications because he doesn't have 'enough time'. It just takes an instant for that and no one would even notice that.

Thank god the problem has already been Addressed by others Story is fine but the pouring of unnecessary s info make the story so tedious to read or enjoy Majority of time is passed just skimming through the chaps trying to separate a the usless from the useful I m in ch180 now Will it improve?