Review Detail of Raul_Romero in Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
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I am in chapter 68, I am afraid of one thing, and that is that you start to nerf the growth of the MC so that the others can catch up, for example with Brother Brian, we already know that the MC is more intelligent, a martial artist, physically an athlete , legendary class, and even so you leave a feeling like the brother will catch up, and the worst thing about this is that to catch up you will literally retard the growth of the MC or start giving Buffs to everyone, it is not necessary that the others are close to him in power, there are more things than power that are necessary, and if you keep wanting to match the others with the MC it's only more desperate. An example of the above is when the MC is described as athletic and a martial genius, his base body is already above 90% of the world, and now by level he goes up he is stronger, but out of nowhere you say that Chris has close to his damage power when he is a child and there is 0 chance that he will get close to his damage, for example, Ace strength multiplier by levels: N1-20 N2-40 N3-80 being Level one his base strength, now put For a child his base strength would be N1-10 N2-20 N3-40, and so at least at the beginning without training between levels, please stop comparing when it's far to start
Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!
Emmanuel_Peter203
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I understand where you're coming from, but don't worry; your concerns are completely unnecessary because I won't neft the mc. In fact, the mc growth is about to take off in the chapters I'm currently writing. And, to clarify, I was not attempting to compare his teammates to him. What was going on there was me telling the readers about the potential damage they could cause if they used it. It's similar to how Anna is with an Epic grade skill that hasn't revealed its true power. Consider this: If you look at the team, only Ace has less special powers than the girls, but even so, he is still on top, so don't worry about my mc.
That's fine, and another point I had is that I hope he doesn't refuse to use magic, it's fine that he's martial, but at the end of the day only magic has the potential to achieve city-destroying power at the lowest levels. , 1vs1 I understand that you prefer weapons, but for mobs, magic is the best, only a fundamental point of this is efficiency. And another thing, if you want help with small details or with plot logic (for example, when you arrive at a type of scenario in which you can use a certain ability to pass it and you don't do it either because of the plot, or because you are already aware of many things) I can do it for free, at least until the chapter I'm in I feel that this fic is worth more than the first positions And it helps, I don't mean to change your idea, but to help the logic that connects point A with point B to get to C, or for reactions to certain actions
Emmanuel_Peter203:I understand where you're coming from, but don't worry; your concerns are completely unnecessary because I won't neft the mc. In fact, the mc growth is about to take off in the chapters I'm currently writing. And, to clarify, I was not attempting to compare his teammates to him. What was going on there was me telling the readers about the potential damage they could cause if they used it. It's similar to how Anna is with an Epic grade skill that hasn't revealed its true power. Consider this: If you look at the team, only Ace has less special powers than the girls, but even so, he is still on top, so don't worry about my mc.
You are the author, I do not want to change your ideas of the story, I mean more what already happens in the chapter Or even plot ideas if you want. An example of small things would be like for example (at least in the chapters I'm in) use the raven more, not only as a scout or to attack, if you say that they can be dispersed, it invites a lot of uses, mount, charge, perimeter, battle formations, even as marksmanship training
Emmanuel_Peter203:No problem and Thanks fir the review. And for the part of helping out with ideas, I don't know mind that but for that to happen you'll have to be in the lastest chapter lol but am open to any idea you have now and once again, I thank you for the review and saying your thoughts.