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Review Detail of Ab4400 in Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

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this is the first time I have ever written a review on WN, and there is a few points I would like to express. FirstPOV style of writing is making the novels way too long and a bit boring for the for the readers. Second there is way too much information and explaining for things are obvious to the readers, for example, explaining Mabs or ranking for the new update. finally you would make the novel more interesting and fun for the readers if you keep it straight to the point and get rid of the POV style. ( thats my opinion based on my experience reading 500+ novels And to my liking).

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Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

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Emmanuel_Peter203
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Thanks for the review really I can't change my writing style but I can change my writing habits and correct them so once again I thank you for your opinion and thanks for reading .