Review Detail of Mark_Mads in Alchemist In The Apocalypse: Rise Of A Legend!

You barely read a dozen chapters and you call the novel one full of plot holes. I like it when I get feedback from readers and I hate it when it's from one who did not even bother reading the novel the way it was meant to.

Here is the problem with the beginning of the novel, but there are already holes in the plot. The future of the novel is very bleak. I agree that this novel is not for me. I just hope this novel gets better. I am not the author of the novel and cannot read "as intended". For example, I am currently reading MMORPG: Rebirth of the Shadow Mage. In comparison, you are almost on the same level. Although your romance will be better.

You could have said so I will note this down and try to improve on my writing This can be called my first novel in a way and I know that this can't be my excuse but I'll will appreciate it if you said this earlier than the way you just came out and condemn the book. I hope I meet your expectations and make the book better and thanks for the review I suppose.