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2023-02-16 09:44

2.8 out of 5 writing quality is a 3 could be better stability of updates 0 story development 3 since its meh not the worst not the best character design 2 he suddenly grows a meter every so often and he left his family for no reason when he could stay world background is 5 since its very detailed and stuff also in total to read the whole thing u would need to pay somewhere between like 30-50 dollars and i aint spending that much to read a story that isnt decent.

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