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DaoistxYTRJ0
DaoistxYTRJ0Lv32yr
2022-08-29 18:38

The writer is talented and has chosen a great idea for a book. But it is clear that English is not the writer's first language. Getting a proofreader would be beneficial. The story starts with a slow pace then one gets sucked into Faerie's life. I would love to know how would she face all the difficulties in the Moel Kingdom.

Trapped Inside a Novel as a Hidden Character

Eyjafiya
4.8
139 Chs

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Lucinda94
Lucinda94Lv1

Well written and very good grammar that is easy to follow and grasp. Five stars for that author👏🏽 The first chapter was catchy and it pulled me into the other chapters. Highly recommended book

2yr

steph_pesi
steph_pesiLv3

The synopsis really cracked me up. Honestly I couldn't stop laughing. It was an amazing read with the first chapters I read. This book has great potential and I hope it succeeds.

2yr
VileX
VileXLv3

Well written, the plot is great, the Grammar Is okay, the characters are easy to understand especially the main characters, every arch in the novel is perfectly written. What else are you waiting for, this will definitely worth your time if you're a lover of fantasy romance genre.

2yr
Aria_Dean
Aria_DeanLv1

Faerie is really funny. I like the idea you came up with like getting your MC stuck inside a novel. I can't wait to see more adventures of her happen in the story. Good job!

2yr
Ja_Ka_0195
Ja_Ka_0195Lv2

Tis is a good fantasy novel I love the synopsis it is really has a good plot and interesting storyline really intriguing this is good author keep it up.

2yr
Angelo_Hullana_2844
Angelo_Hullana_2844Lv1

Wow! If you're a fan of fantasy, then this is the right book for you. Be ready to be in a world of fantasy. Enjoy reading everyone Recommended ❤️

2yr
Lauryn_Nyamao
Lauryn_NyamaoLv1

I was pulled in by the synopsis and I can say that the author hasn't disappointed me at all. It is a great books and would recommend it to other people.

2yr
Muche_Godwin
Muche_GodwinLv4

The story intro and synopsis are amazing. This is a fresh and intriguing story, and I can't wait for more chapters to be uploaded soon. I highly recommend this novel.

2yr
Vennom
VennomLv2

please everyone, a standing ovation to this novel. It deserves it. The author deserves it. Reading it is like watching a movie because everything is explained in details; How the characters feel, their surroundings and what surrounds them. Apart from that, my insights arrows are pointing to me that one day one time, when remembering about this story, I'm gonna cry coz I'm gonna miss it, i will miss the introduced characters. COOL WORK!

2yr
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