The story has potential. The first couple of chapters are confusing, as if they were written in a rush, without much explanation. Mild spoilers ahead. The MC, a dragon, is tied to the female MC. One wellbeing depends on the other but the dragon just doesn't talk to the female MC. He doesn't explain jack so she fumbles in the dark. I know, I know it is somehow the key point of the story but I find it is impossible to enjoy it. The premise quickly turns from amusing to preposterous despite its potential. This is not for me.
Nefarian
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